Thứ Năm, 24 tháng 3, 2011

3 bodies:Students’ life in the context of high inflation/ increasing price

First of all, increasing price influences to the students’ studying. Most of students are grown up in farming families. They can’t afford their studying fee, living fee, department fee or transportation fee. Therefore, they have to spend much time on working outside. A student’s energy is limited. If students spend too much time on his or her part-time job, they may lose their time needed for sleep, rest, study and recreation. Besides, they are difficult to focus on the lessons because they are tired and they want to sleep. When students have to work overtime in order to earn more money, they are not enough time for doing homework, preparing new lessons. If you get sick, it is nearly impossible to pursue the lessons. Moreover, some job may expose them to various social problems such as violence, dishonesty that may poison their minds. What is the indirect reason of these things? Increasing price causes bad effects on the quality of their study.

The second, students’ hobbies are interrupted by increasing price. Hobbies are activities which help one to maintain a mental and emotional balance. Example some hobbies like painting pictures, singing songs, performing on musical instruments, enjoying collecting stamps, going shopping, playing sports, and so on. If you don’t have money, you can’t do it. The increases fuel, gas and electric prices more than doubling since 2000 causes of less left-over income available to save. So, they don’t have lots of money for their hobbies. It is clear that hobbies are the foundation of one’s feelings and emotions. Therefore, if it’s failed, you will be easy to depress and be disgusted with anything in the life. All things above show that students’ mental is also affected by increasing price.

I think many people aware of the importance of health in the life. So, does increasing price impact on students’ health? How does it affect? Personal hygiene, proper nutrition and a good habit is good for your mind and body. But in increasing price life as if students are easy to escape from worries, anxieties, bad temper and have nutrients meals. In the past a few years, with money in the pockets which parents send to students every month, people can take whatever measures to see fit stay healthy or to improve their health and take in proper amount of vitamins, spend money for nutrients meals. Schoolboys have lots of time to do exercise each day to build their muscles. Nowadays, it is difficult to do like before. The cost of fuel, electric and gas have gone up; therefore, they must manage to pay for host before then they spend for the other items. In additional, students are easy to become unhealthy and thin because they don’t have money to buy food or drink such as fruits, vegetables, seafood and less red meat like beef and pork which is good for their health. Besides, the price of diagnosing and treating diseases was extremely expensive, they can’t afford to pay fee when they are sick and must go to hospital. That’s extremely dangerous. As can you seen, the increasing price hurts a lot about students’ health.

Thứ Ba, 15 tháng 3, 2011

Power of writing!

                                 Power of writing

How many times have you been want to arrive at a certain time or place and then forgotten the exact details? Have you ever felt depressed, angry or upset over an incident or person and felt better after writing about it? Therefore, I think that before you write, the first question for writer always is, "Why am I writing?" "What is my goal for writing?" From things above, I want to give you some proofs to recognize the power of writing.

How is writing? Writing is the act of putting letters, symbols, numbers, or words on a piece of paper, on the wall or a computer screen or anywhere you can see and read. People have used many tools for writing including paint, pencils, pens, typewriters, and computers. Writing is used to express and explain ideas. . The primary purpose of writing is communication. Now, I will show two main purposes which express the power of writing.

First, writing can prevent mistakes and help remembering important things. The writing process includes prewriting, composing, revising, editing, and publishing. Moreover, writing has many rules including grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Therefore, writing helps detecting and returning errors. Example, you want to report on something for a program or plan, if you only speak you can’t know what wrong with your report. And, when you say mistake has probably happened more than once or twice in your life because when you talk you might forget what you say in your oral presentation However, writing can help clarify your message and record your ideas. Especially, you can explain concepts or ideas in greater detail and give the recipient a visual representation of your intended message. We can’t refuse the power of writing when information technology develop, the reports, documents, letters, texts ,entries in Blogs that are used until now. Writing something down helps us to remember the information details and much more effectively.

Second, writing is a great way to deal with your feelings. Writing can preserve our memories of the special people in our life. For instance, every times you write diary, literatures, reports or poetries journals, letters, and especially free writing you will express your feelings, attitudes, ideas, experiences, and needs. As a result, you are easy to reminisce about the wonderful romantic adventures and you share with a smile on your face… Other examples, a parent may also find comfort in reading the memoirs of their parents or grandparents or reading stories written by their own children. Or when you read the private diary of your brother, sister or teenager’s private diary, you discover lots of interesting things in it. In addition, you can answer this question to find out the power of writing. How many of us have spent hours reading all the carefully handwritten notes or love letters we have received over the years. All of them show that when you rescue your feeling by writing, you can develop total emotionally and physically.

Nowadays, the importance of writing has become even more evident with the increased popularity of literacy person. As you can see above, writing can be one of the best ways of communicating. It has power extremely big. If you observe carefully your life, you will realize that many pieces of writing have many other purposes.

Outline :Students’ life in the context of high inflation/ increasing price.

Introduction.
There are many problems which affect to students’ life such as relationships, jobs, activities and so on.
Increasing price is the most influence to students’ life.
There are many students who are affected negative in facing with increasing price.

Body 1:
Increasing price influences to the students’ studying.
-Most of students are grown up in farming families. They can’t afford their studying fee, living fee, department fee or transportation fee. Therefore, they have to spend much time on working outside.
-If students spend too much time on his or her part-time job:
+They may lose their time needed for sleep, rest, study and recreation.
+They are difficult to focus on the lessons because they are tired and they want to sleep. +They are not enough time for doing homework, preparing new lessons.
+If you get sick, it is nearly impossible to pursue the lessons.
+Some job may expose them to various social problems such as violence, dishonesty that may poison their minds.
What is the indirect reason of these things? Increasing price causes bad effects on the quality of their study.

Body 2
Students’ hobbies are interrupted by increasing price.
-Hobbies are activities which help one to maintain a mental and emotional balance.  Some hobbies:painting pictures, singing songs, performing on musical instruments, enjoying collecting stamps, going shopping, playing sports.
-The increases fuel, gas and electric prices more than doubling since 2000 causes of less left-over income available to save.
-They don’t have lots of money for their hobbies.
-It is obvious that hobbies are the foundation of one’s feelings and emotions.
-It’s failed, you will be easy to depress and be disgusted with anything in the life.
All things above show that students’ mental is also affected by increasing price.

Body 3
Does increasing price impact on students’ health? How does it affect?
-Personal hygiene, proper nutrition and a good habit is good for your mind and body.
-Students are easy to escape from worries, anxieties, bad temper and have nutrients meals.
-In the past a few years:
 +People can take whatever measures to see fit stay healthy or to improve their health and take in proper amount of vitamins, spend money for nutrients meals.
+Schoolboys have lots of time to do exercise each day to build their muscles.
-Nowadays,
+The cost of fuel, electric and gas have gone up; therefore, they must manage to pay for host before then they spend for the other items.
+Students are easy to become unhealthy and thin because they don’t have money to buy food or drink such as fruits, vegetables, seafood and less red meat like beef and pork which is good for their health.
+ The price of diagnosing and treating diseases was extremely expensive, they can’t afford to pay fee when they are sick and must go to hospital.
As can you seen, the increasing price hurts a lot about students’ health.

Conclusion.
From what has been mentioned above, you will be easy to recognize the increasing price affects students’ life a lot both students’ qualities of studying and standard of living.


Four introductions:Students’ life in the context of high inflation/ increasing price.

Students’ life in the context of high inflation/ increasing price.

1. Relevant.
The increases fuel prices already have driven up utility bills nearly 30% in the past five years. The cost of electric and gas have gone up, more than doubling since 2000. One of the big changes in other commodities is the increase of price such as food (rice, milk, meat, fruit and vegetables, etc.), personal effects, learning tool, and so on. As result, many students have to work overtime in order to earn more money which is used to buy some books, spend on water and electricity bills. Others reduce spending; therefore they become unhealthy and thin. From what has been mentioned above, you will be easy to recognize that the increasing price affects students’ life a lot. In this article, we will find out how the increasing price affects students’ life.

2. Anecdote.
When I got up this morning I felt under the weather, with a bad headache, so I absented myself from my university and cooled my head with an ice-bag. As the temperature reached 39 degrees, I knew that I must go to hospital. I don’t have motorbike, so I have to take a bus. As you know the cost of taking bus were also 3,000 dong two months ago, it becomes 4,000 dong now. I went to hospital by four bus route. In additional, I usually go to school by bus. Therefore, you can see if it was 2 months ago I can save some money. Besides, the price of diagnosing and treating diseases was extremely expensive. I had to call for my friend borrowing money to pay. As can you seen, students who meet lots of difficulties to live in period that price increases rapidly. So, what do students do to manage their budget in increasing price?

3. Broad statement.
Nowadays, there are many problems which affect to students’ life such as relationships, jobs, activities and so on. However, I think that increasing price is the most influence to students’ life. Many students have to join part-time jobs or maintain the mark to earn money for school fees that impact to students’ studying. Others owe big money which they don’t afford to pay, so, they are easy to become bad person. The problem of increasing price is a world one. It is difficult to solve this problem. That is truth that there are many students who are affected negative in facing with increasing price.

4. Question.
Did you complain about increasing price? Have you ever heard about the word “inflation”? What is inflation? How does high inflation impact students’ life?  How is it measured? When you read this essay, you may be students or not. Although you are anyone, I think you always great care about students’ problems. Is that right? Today, I want to show you about the students’ difficulties when they face with high inflation.